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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（17）
最近你的朋友Tom在他的微博上发了这样一个帖子：
These days, I feel my school life is very boring. Every day I do the same things—taking lessons, doing exercises and taking exams. Every day I take the same way—classroom, playground and dining hall. Every day the teachers say the same thing to us: Study hard and try to enter a better high school. . .
I want to make m y school life easier and more colorful. What should I do?
假如你是Jim，请你给Tom回个帖子。根据中文大意和英文提示，写出意思连贯，符合逻辑，不少于80词的短文。请不要写出你真实的校名和姓名。内容要求：
1. 针对Tom的困惑，先谈谈你的看法；
2. 结合自己的学习生活实践为他提几条合理的建议；
3. 最后送上你的祝愿。
Hi Tom,
How are you? I saw the problem in your weibo. I can understand your feelings very well.
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Love,
Jim
【答案】
One possible version:
Hi Tom,
How are you? I saw the problem in your weibo. I can understand your feelings very well.
As junior 3 students, it is true that our life is a little boring. But I also think it’s a kind of experience that we teenagers have to go through. We can do something to make our school life easier and more colorful.
Here are some pieces of advice for you. First, we can do some sports to make us healthy. Second, it’s useful for us to do some reading or listen to some music after school. Last but not least, we can spend some time talking with our teachers, families or friends. I think they will bring us happiness.
I hope my advice will give you some help, and you can enjoy your school life better.
Love,
Jim
【解析】
试题分析：本题要求根据朋友微博的内容，回一个贴，帮助朋友解决成长中的烦恼。根据提示内容，短文要从三个方面进行写作：对朋友困惑的看法、合理的建议及对朋友的祝愿。短文要注意语言的选择及说话的语气，用恰当的情态动词及句子结构，使人愿意接受建议。短文用第一人称，用一般现在时态。
写作亮点：短文第一段，首先表示对朋友的感受的同情，语言切入准确自然，让人容易接受。第二段说明初中毕业班的生活的必然性与必要性，为下面提建议打好伏笔。第三段用first, second等等列出系列建议，层次清楚，要点分明。最后一段提出希望与祝愿。语言准确，中心突出。文中用到了定语从句，不定式作状语，不定式作主语等等结构，使短文显得更加生动具体。
考点：考查话题类作文写作。
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