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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（13）
下面是大明写给他的朋友Tom的信，信中描述了他的烦恼。请你以他的朋友Tom的身份，给他写一封80词左右的回信，在信中指出他的问题并给他提出建议。信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
My classmate, Lucy, bought a new pen. I liked it very much, so I used it without her permission. Unluckily, I broke it. Then I put it back secretly. Now she finds out the truth and is very angry with me. I don’t know what to do. Can you help me?
Yours,
Daming
Dear Daming,
I know your problem. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
【答案】
Dear Daming,
I know your problem. You’ve made two mistakes. First, you used your classmate’s pen without her permission. Second, when you broke the pen, you didn’t tell her the truth. Yes, you must tell her immediately. If you tell her the truth, perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.
Then I think you should offer to pay. You can use your pocket money to buy a new pen for her. She will realize that you’re truly sorry.
I hope the advice can help you. I’m sure you will make up with her soon.
Yours,
Tom.
【解析】
试题分析：本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意提出Tom的错误，并提出意见。错误一定要清楚，建议要实用。时态涉及一版现在时和一般过去时。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少。如 perhaps she’ll be angry with you, but at least you’ll prove you are honest.等。学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：提纲作文。
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