初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（14）

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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（14）

近来，各中学在组织学生外出旅游时因各种原因常常会陷入两难选择。假设你是张楚，上周你班就学校组织学生郊游问题展开了讨论。现在，请根据以下提示给某英语报社写信，谈谈讨论情况。
1．外出郊游的好处；
2．外出郊游应注意之处；
3．你本人的看法。

注意：
1．词数：120左右，信的开头和结尾已为你写好，并不计人总词数；
2．可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯；
3．参考词汇：郊游 outing

Dear Editor,
I’m a senior high school student named Zhang Chu.  Last week, our class had a heated discussion about whether the school should organize any outing for us students. The results are as follows.
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Yours sincerely, 
Zhang Chu

【答案】
Dear Editor,
  I’m a  senior high school student named Zhang Chu. Last week, our class had a heated discussion about whether the school should organize any outing for us students. The results are as follows.
  Outings have lots of advantages. For one thing, they can make us relaxed and enjoy the beauty of nature. For another, they help enrich our social experience and gain some practical survival skills.
  However, there is still something we must keep in m ind when go for an outing. Always put safety in the first place, for outings will be meaningless without safety. What’s more, environmental protection should also be our concern. For example, we can’t throw any litter anywhere we go.
  In my opinion, we should take at least one outing each term to make us refreshed and get closer to nature. 

Yours sincerely, 
Zhang Chu

【解析】
试题分析：本篇作文叫小作者介绍外出郊游的一些情况，小作者首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。要求介绍。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。小作者还必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。如For one thing, they can make us relaxed and enjoy the beauty of nature. For another, they help enrich our social experience and gain some practical survival skills. However, there is still something we must keep in m ind when go for an outing.等使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：考查话题类作文。