初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（11）

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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（11）

假设你叫张琳，你班李华同学拟参加学校新一届学生会主席竞选，你认为他具有所有成为优秀学生会主席的个人品质，决定投票给他，写一封推荐信介绍他的情况。字数不少于90（开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。

 

姓名	星座	最喜欢的颜色	爱好	品质
李华，一名九年级学生	1994年2月23日出生 Pisces	绿色 给他能量 代表着新生命和成长	酷爱篮球，擅长绘画，经常为学生会做额外工作	慷慨；勤奋；做事锲而不舍；富有创造力和想象力，能够提出一些新观点；组织能力强

 

【答案】
Dear Sir or Madam:
I’m writing to recommend my classmate Li Hua as the new chairperson of the St udents’ Union.
Li Hua was born on February 23rd, 1994. His star sign  is Pisces/ He’s Pisces. He’s generous, kind, easy-going and modest. He works very hard. His favorite color is green and he thinks green can give him energy, as it is the color of nature and represents new life and growth. As a Grade 9 student, although sometimes he has to stay  up late to complete his homework, he’s so energetic that he won’t mind doing extra work for the Students’ Union. 
He’s crazy about playing basketball. He’s creative and imaginative enough to come up with new ideas. He never gives up easily. He’s more orga nized than any other student in our class.
I think Li Hua has all the personal qualities to be an excellent chairperson. I’ll vote for him. I hope you can agree with me. 
Yours sincerely 

【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍王华的优秀品质和才能，主要用第三人称，和一般现在时态。考生首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。运用适当的短语表达中心思想，增加作文的可读性。完成提示词时也要符合事实。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

写作亮点：这篇短文不仅介绍人物时注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，为文章增色不少。可见该生英语功底扎实。.如so …that…, to achieve his dream， tries his best to ，is ready to, besides above. The robot he made can sing and dance定语从句等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：提纲作文。