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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（7）
Jack是一名九年级的学生，最近迷上手机游戏，经常玩到深夜，睡眠不足，不能认真听讲，导致成绩下降。妈妈很生气，不再让他使用手机。假如你是他的朋友Tina，请你写一封信给他，建议他要合理使用手机，如查阅资料，记单词等。同时，考试在即，要理解父母、老师的心情，要主动去沟通，得到他们的原谅和帮助。
要求：
包含所给要点，语言流畅，意思连贯，适当拓展；词数80词左右 ；开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：become poor in study; get angry with ; communicate with; forgive(宽恕).
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarreled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.
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Yours
Tina
【答案】
Dear Jack，
I am sorry to hear that you quarrelled with your parents about playing mobile phone games.
You spent so much time playing games that you forgot when to sleep and you felt too sleepy and tired to listen to the teachers in class the next day. Because of these, you became poor in your study. Your mother got angry with you. You felt bad about this.
Firstly, I think you should stop playing games. You can use mobile phone to search for information, and look up new words. it is a useful tool in your study.
Secondly, you need to communicate with your parents and teachers, and let them know your problems. They will help you. at the same time ,they will forgive you for your mistakes.
I hope my suggestions are of great value to you.
Yours，
Tina
【解析】
试题分析：本文所给材料比较详细，我们要做的就是用正确的英语把这些内容表达出来。动笔前要认真阅读材料，不可遗漏要点，并适当发挥。注意文中涉及的时态一般现在时和一般过去时。写作中适当使用连词，注意上下文联系紧密，符合逻辑关系。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少.如 you need to communicate with your parents and teachers；they will forgive you for your mistakes.等。学习中注意总结,牢记一些固定句式及短语,写作时就可以适当引用,使文章的表达更有逻辑性,更富有条理。
考点：提纲作文。
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