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初中英语题库题目及答案解析详解---书面表达（3）
根据要求完成短文写作。
每个人对幸福的定义都是不同的。写一篇词数80字左右的短文，谈谈你认为幸福应该是什么样子的，说说你打算怎么做或者做些什么来追求你的幸福。
要求：不用逐字逐句翻译，内容要合理通顺。
【答案】
What is happiness?
What is happiness? Different people have different opinions. Some believe that happiness is that they have much money Others regard happiness as having a good job or making a progress.But I think happiness is the simple life we have every day. It is a true feeling from our inner heart!
When we help an elderly across the road, or give some solutions to our classmates’ learning problems. We feel happy. When we get some help from others when we are in need, we feel happy. When we make new friends, or have a meal with families, or have a conversation with parents and so on, we feel quite happy.
Everyone would appreciate the people who give us a hand. What’s more, we are glad when we stay with friends and families. All of these stand for we are happy. We should also be kind to others and help others as possible as we can. Then we will f eel we are the happiest in the world.
Happiness is just simple like these!
【解析】
试题分析：本题是一篇以“What is happiness”为话题的作文。根据要求，短文是说明自己对幸福的认识，打算怎样做来追求自己的幸福两个方面展开写作。短文用第一人称形式，一般现在时态进行写作。
写作亮点：本文第一段阐明作者的观点：幸福就在我们周围，它是我们内心深处的一种感受。第二段举例证明自己的观点：幸福就是生活中的点点滴滴；第三段讲述如何成为最幸福的人。最后一段点题：幸福就是这样简单。短文层次清楚，结构明晰。中心突出，重点突出。文中用到了大量的复合句及短语、句型等等，使本文更加生动，为本文增色不少。
考点：考查话题作文。
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