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春节将至,你在美国的朋友Tom来信,想了解一下中国的春节,请你根据以下提示,向他介绍一下春节,并希望他能来中国玩。
提示: 1.春节是中国很重要的一个节日,家人团聚并吃大餐,孩子们晚上喜欢放烟花; 2.有很多好吃的食物,但还是要健康饮食,多吃水果和蔬菜; 3.家庭成员都穿新衣服,你想在购物中心买新衣服, 想买红色外套,蓝色牛仔裤和一双白色的鞋,你觉得蓝色和白色搭配得很好, 它们可能要花500元。
要求:不要逐句翻译,句意连贯,语法正确,要点齐全,书写认真,可适当发挥,词数70词左右。 __________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 Hi, Tom. I’d like to tell you something about the Spring Festival. The Spring Festival in the most important festival in China. It is usually in January or Fevbuary. On that day, all family members get together to have a big dinner. The children like to watch fireworks in the evening. We have a lot of delecious food, such dumplings, meat, chicken and so on. But I think it is important to eat healthy food. So we must eat more vegetables and fruits. On Spring Festival, we must wear new clothes. I want to buy new clothes in the shopping center. I want a red coat, blue jeans and a pair of white shoes. Because I think blue matches white very well. They may cost me 500 yuan. Would you like to come? I hope you can come here to celebrate it with me together. You must like it.
试题分祈:这篇作文要求我们给 Tom 介绍一下我们的春节,题目中给出了我们具体的写作提示,我们可以用正确的英语将这些内容表达出来。春节是我们很熟悉的一个节日,在这个节日里,有很多的风俗习惯,因此在写作的内容上,材料是很丰富的,学生们会觉得有话可写。但是我们要注意英语表达和我们汉语不—样的地方,尤其注意语序和谓语动词的形式。写作前,先想好需要使用的时态和人称,写作的顺序,这些内容的安排等,要有条理,层次清楚。写作时,我们在保证语法准确的基础上,可以使用一些较好的句型或短语,使短文的表达更加流畅一些,增强表现力。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者给自己的朋友 Tom 介绍了关于春节的一些情况,并邀请他来—起过春节。内容完整,包含了题目所给的所有信息,没有遗漏要点。短文的表达也很流畅,符合英语的表达规范,时态、人称运用正确。尤其是短文中使用了一些连词,如but,and,because 等,使得文章的意思很连贯,有节奏感。作文中较好的句子有如On that day, all family members get together to have a big dinner. The children like to watch fireworks in the evening. But I think it is important to eat healthy food. Because I think blue matches white very well.等。 考点:提纲类作文。
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