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请根据表格中所给的提示,写一篇短文介绍你的网友Mike。 要求:1) 字数在80左右,不得出现真实校名和姓名。 2)文中须包括所有提示的内容,每个方面都可适当加以想象发挥。
基本信息 14岁,高个子,戴眼镜,在七年级(3)班尖子生,最喜欢的学科是……
生活和饮食 每天6点半起床,步行上学…… 常吃 / 从不吃 / 很少吃…… 每周锻炼…… (给出合理建议)
爱好 擅长……;是……的一员
梦想 成为一名……
My online friend I have an online friend. His name is Mike. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】 One possible version: My online friend I have an online friend. His name is Mike. He is 14 years old. He is tall with a pair of glasses.He is studying in Class3 Grade7. He is a top student. His favorite subject is English, because he thinks it is interesting. He gets up at 6:30, and he goes to school on foot. He often eats fruits and he never eats hamburgers. He seldom eats ice-cream. He does exercise twice a week. I think he should exercise every day. He is good at drawing, and he is in the school art club. He wants to be an artist. I hope his dream can come true.
【解析】 试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我的网友Mike。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:His name is…,He is...., because he thinks ...,I think…,I hope...等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意在文后要祝他梦想成真。
写作亮点:本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我的网友的名字,接下来介绍他的个人信息:年龄、长相、生活、饮食、擅长和梦想,最后希望他梦想成真。此处get up, go to school, on foot, twice a week, be good at, be in, want to do sth, come true等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 考点:提纲作文。
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