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初中英语语法练习题二轮复习(附详细答案解析)---书面表达
你最喜欢哪类电视节目？你最喜欢的电视节目又是哪个？你喜欢它哪些方面？你能从中收获些什么？假期快到了，你打算在假期如何安排时间观看这个节目并谈谈你的理由。请以My favorite TV show为题写一篇不少于60字的作文。要求字迹工整，调理清晰。
【答案】
My Favorite TV Program
My favorite TV program is "Animal World". We can watch the program every Sunday evening. The program tells us the story of animal life. We can learn the animals' habits and their natural surroundings.
In Shanghai Zoo, there are also many animals. But in the program we can see more animals. It gives me a chance to learn about the other creatures. Animals are our friends. It is wrong to kill them for food. We must do our best to protect them. I hope I can do something for the wild animals.In summer vacation I’m going to watch it every Sunday evening and learn more about animals.
【解析】
试题分析：首先要认真阅读前面的提示认真审题，确定文章的中心。注意文章文体、人称和时态。本文主要应用一般现在时，所以在写作时，要尤其一般现在时的表达方式。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。温馨提醒：考生必须认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
写作亮点：这篇短文使用了一些固定句式和短语，为文章增色不少，如：My favorite TV program，the story of animal life，the animals' habits and their natural surroundings，a chance to learn about the other creatures，kill them for food，do our best to protect them，learn more about animals等，学习中注意总结，牢记一些固定句式及短语，写作时就可以适当引用，使文章的表达更有逻辑性、更富有条理。
考点：话题作文。
根据中文大意和英文提示词语，按要求写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文。所给的英文提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实姓名。
假如你是李磊，你的笔友Tom想来北京旅游，请你给他提一些建议。如：时间、活动安排等，并给出原因。
提示词语：the best time, warm, do some sightseeing
Dear Tom,
I’m happy to know that you want to visit Beijing. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Lei
【答案】
Dear Tom
I’m happy to know that you want to visit Beijing.Here is some advice for you.
I think the best time to come is in spring because it’s neither too hot nor too cold. Why not do some sightseeing such as visiting Bei Hai Park and the Summer Palace? They are famous. And you’d better take a camera because you may want to take some photos.
There are lots of people visiting Beijing in spring, so it’s a good idea to book your hotel online before coming. The most comfortable way to travel in Beijing is by taxi, but it is the most expensive one.
I hope my advice will be helpful. I’m looking forward to seeing you in Beijing soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇根据汉语和英语提示写一篇书信给笔友Tom提建议来北京旅游的时间和安排。文中必须用到提示词the best time, warm, do some sightseeing以第一人称的形式来写，注意书信的称呼和结束语，要把时间和安排交代清，注意一些固定搭配和词组，考查了学生的综合能力。 写作亮点：这篇文章构思新颖，内容包括面很全，语言组织力很强，切中题意，文中出现了一些好的句型如：I’m happy to know that，he best time to come is in spring because it’s neither too hot nor too cold.，you’d better take a camera，it’s a good idea to book your hotel online before coming.使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。
考点：话题作文。
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