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合肥市八年级英语测试综合试卷含听力和答案解析
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某中学自开展向"新时代好少年学习"的活动以来，校园里涌现了许多好少年.请你以"A Sunshine Teenager"为题写一篇英语短文，介绍一位你身边的阳光好少年（假如他名叫Li Wei）.
要点提示：
1.热情、活泼、开朗、乐观向上；
2.诚实善良，团结友爱，乐于助人；
3.勤奋好学，积极参加各种活动；
4.……
参考词汇：warm-hearted 热心的；take an active part in 积极参加
要求：
1.不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥；
2.词数100左右.
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【答案】例文
A Sunshine Teenager
Hello, I'm Xiao Ming. Our school had an activity "Learn from Good New Century Teenagers". From then on, there are lots of sunshine teenagers around us.
Li Wei is one of them. He is honest and kind. He gets on well with others. He is always ready to not only help others but also go to the old people's home to do something for the old. He reads newspapers for them，cleans their rooms and washes their clothes. Also he is warm-hearted，active and outgoing. He works hard and likes reading.
What's more, he takes an active part in all kinds of sports activities. After school, he often plays football with his teammates. And he joins a lot of school clubs, like music, art and chess. He does well and learns a lot from the activities.
Li Wei is a good sunshine teenager. I should learn from him.
【解析】
【详解】1.题干解读：本篇材料作文要求介绍一位身边的阳光好少年Li Wei，从人格——热情、活泼、开朗、乐观向上；品质——诚实善良，团结友爱，乐于助人；在校表现——勤奋好学，积极参加各种活动等几个方面讲述；短文描述人的日常行为，人称为第三人称，用一般现在时来介绍，注意主谓一致关系。
2.例文点评：文章陈述的中心突出，首尾呼应，正文围绕Li Wei的人格、品质及在校表现描述他是个阳光少年；文句表述逻辑清楚，能围绕题干所给的关键词展开。
3.高分亮点：
短语：from then on；one of… ；get on well with；be ready to；work hard；take an active part in等。
高分句型：并列连词not only…but also…；情态动词should；插入语what's more，There be…句型。
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