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2020版初中高中英语语法练习题及答案详解大全---书面表达（1）
假设Daniel是你的好朋友，请以My good friend为题，写一篇不少于80词的短文介绍他。
1、方脸，微笑的大眼睛，班里最高。短发让他看起来很帅气。
2、 擅长语数外，物理也比其他人好。他每天花一小时做作业。乐于助人，有事困扰我时，他……耐心，他帮我……
3、他的理想学校很大、很美。他有更多的空余时间放在爱好上。他希望作业少，课外活动多。他每天上体育课和电脑课。
4、他长大后想……
（要求：短文合理分段，行文流畅，书写规范，应包括以上所给的要点，可以适当发挥。）
My good friend
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【答案】
My good friend
Daniel is my good friend. He has a square face with big smiling eyes. He is the tallest in the class. Short hair makes him looks very handsome. He is good at Chinese, math and English. He is better at physical than other students. He spends one hour doing his homework every day. He is ready to help others. When something bothers me, he is very patient to help me. His ideal school is very big and very beautiful. He would have more free time on hobbies. He wants less homework and more activities. He can have P.E.and computer classes every day. When he grow up, he wants to be a polite. He dreams that he will be able to fly in the sky one day.
【解析】
试题分析：这是一篇提纲作文。本文主要描述了Daniel的外貌、学习、品质、梦想学校等，全文主要用一般现在时态。
写作亮点：文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，例如be good a, be ready to , spend...doing... ，with smiling eyes等短语；文中恰当使用了形容词的比较级、最高级、when引导的时间状语从句和宾语从句。整篇文章层次清晰，内容饱满，发挥合理，表达流畅。
考点：提纲作文。
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